tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-827113736357895263.post2640089651593057659..comments2023-10-06T00:42:14.738-07:00Comments on Mexican Radio: If Jesus Wrote a PoemHerotomosthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11486093602914824276noreply@blogger.comBlogger22125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-827113736357895263.post-35618041724328830942012-06-07T22:25:08.960-07:002012-06-07T22:25:08.960-07:00Reading this was like looking in the mirror. I lo...Reading this was like looking in the mirror. I love the abstract notions and how they tie together if I close my eyes and repeat them outloud, as if I chanted this in the bathroom at midnight I would be visited by magnificent demons (who would make a great dirty martini and help my sort out my record collection)...onward and viva laIsadora Gruyehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13036782300945079952noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-827113736357895263.post-27780711598934003472012-05-16T10:58:51.763-07:002012-05-16T10:58:51.763-07:00I really wish I understood this poem. The executi...I really wish I understood this poem. The executioners chair is for criminals - of course, Jesus was considered a criminal. But he really was "beauty, truth, & justice". I don't see how "sad in it's ugly simplicity" fits and Nirvana is the buddhist version of heaven? The end makes me think of gambling... and I know you just had such a weekend. <br /><br />Hmm. I would love an explanation if you feel like giving one (I know not all poets like to do that) but I am curious. I seem to be the only dimwitted one... ;PMargarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-827113736357895263.post-2133779240009419592012-05-16T05:57:47.100-07:002012-05-16T05:57:47.100-07:00Wow, you really imparted us with so much impact in...Wow, you really imparted us with so much impact in these words!<br />"rabid for truth, beauty and justice"<br />I have to read it again!<br />Well Done :DEllahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06070952447277684613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-827113736357895263.post-63716350985275990512012-05-15T15:56:59.002-07:002012-05-15T15:56:59.002-07:00"Rabid for truth, beauty and justice
But sad ..."Rabid for truth, beauty and justice<br />But sad in it's ugly simplicity"<br /><br />The coupling of rabid with the three nouns in this line is both unsettling and affirming. This feels so modern world to me, because we often consider simplicity sad or ugly.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12460881702249079009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-827113736357895263.post-9046288832372058322012-05-15T15:00:56.729-07:002012-05-15T15:00:56.729-07:00"the executioners chair
Rabid for truth"..."the executioners chair<br />Rabid for truth"<br /><br />That is the ultimate moment of truth, clarity, and terror.Shawnahttp://rosemarymint.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-827113736357895263.post-14701421366053524522012-05-15T14:42:50.319-07:002012-05-15T14:42:50.319-07:00Buddy you have my head spinning with this one - ti...Buddy you have my head spinning with this one - tight and hard like rabbit punches. Great though, really good!Mystic_Momhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00099062213372011260noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-827113736357895263.post-51247303038291524152012-05-15T11:26:13.761-07:002012-05-15T11:26:13.761-07:00Sometimes its almost easier to say it short--thoug...Sometimes its almost easier to say it short--though it can take hours to get it right--this feels spontaneous as a reflex clench on that trigger when something flashes up in your peripheral vision and you think it might want to eat you. Great concept, Corey, and exemplary execution (no pun intended.;_) )hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-827113736357895263.post-8231203087599474192012-05-15T02:26:29.906-07:002012-05-15T02:26:29.906-07:00this is philosophy posing as a poem. sly trick, yo...this is philosophy posing as a poem. sly trick, you clever thing. <br />the electric chair image is brilliant on so many levels. plus its a hell of a conversation piece. <br />sledgehammer of a piece.shawnacyhttp://shawnacykiker.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-827113736357895263.post-78615860920596844392012-05-15T02:18:10.014-07:002012-05-15T02:18:10.014-07:00"For the lack of a better comparison
It would..."For the lack of a better comparison<br />It would be like the executioners chair"<br /><br />The ugly truth, morbid in its care. We often lack the courage to venture out different from what others are doing! Great Write!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-827113736357895263.post-11524521764556608082012-05-15T01:58:55.462-07:002012-05-15T01:58:55.462-07:00I had better not put about Jesus not being able to...I had better not put about Jesus not being able to write a poem uhem ;) However kewl scribeAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17957913294364310380noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-827113736357895263.post-26952549078930195152012-05-14T20:15:12.570-07:002012-05-14T20:15:12.570-07:00Rabid for truth, beauty and justice
This line esp...Rabid for truth, beauty and justice<br /><br />This line especially rabid for truth really got me! Thank you, for visiting my words today and great piece to ponder here!Hannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10124956200834969600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-827113736357895263.post-7386765349459526452012-05-14T19:39:46.133-07:002012-05-14T19:39:46.133-07:00Wow, can't get this one out of my mind now. Th...Wow, can't get this one out of my mind now. This is inspirational and has me thinking now about what I think Jesus writing poetry would be like. Wow!Judy Roneyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05439992575221937268noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-827113736357895263.post-31762667807059648412012-05-14T18:20:39.363-07:002012-05-14T18:20:39.363-07:00Jesus wrote MUCH poetry, I believe....but then aga...Jesus wrote MUCH poetry, I believe....but then again, I am sure you know that.<br />Beyond that, your poem strikes a strong chord. Executioner's chair - yikes.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-827113736357895263.post-36447395376249513982012-05-14T17:33:35.043-07:002012-05-14T17:33:35.043-07:00I think it's brevity lends it its punch. I wo...I think it's brevity lends it its punch. I would argue there's a lot more there, but I never know when to shut up. Spare but plenty powerful, thank you.W.k. kortashttp://wkkortas.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-827113736357895263.post-14792075684127948572012-05-14T14:17:10.340-07:002012-05-14T14:17:10.340-07:00What can I say...very thought provoking and packs ...What can I say...very thought provoking and packs a punch ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-827113736357895263.post-33180558798754651282012-05-14T12:50:26.053-07:002012-05-14T12:50:26.053-07:00Amazing. I tend to see all your work this way, so...Amazing. I tend to see all your work this way, so I am not surprised. Great, great, great!Mary Ann Potterhttp://www.fromthestarcatcher.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-827113736357895263.post-68559533000629556282012-05-14T10:44:18.732-07:002012-05-14T10:44:18.732-07:00"You are looking at Nirvana's face
But yo..."You are looking at Nirvana's face<br />But you can't seem to pull the trigger" Just WOW!Laurahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15349928247626849914noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-827113736357895263.post-84136705569032798462012-05-14T10:43:35.526-07:002012-05-14T10:43:35.526-07:00"You are looking at Nirvana's face
But yo..."You are looking at Nirvana's face<br />But you can't seem to pull the trigger" WOw!Laurahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15349928247626849914noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-827113736357895263.post-83682146926380842122012-05-14T10:22:00.890-07:002012-05-14T10:22:00.890-07:00I love the vry idea of Jesus writing a poem - that...I love the vry idea of Jesus writing a poem - that would make a cool writing exercise......yoiks re the last lines - looking at Nirvana, but unable to pull the trigger. Pretty powerful stuff, kiddo.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-827113736357895263.post-88565317111604300272012-05-14T09:39:00.788-07:002012-05-14T09:39:00.788-07:00Have to agree with Kerry, this is brilliant! Poet...Have to agree with Kerry, this is brilliant! Poetry like an executioner's chair...now that's a thought I'll be pondering for a while.Mary B. Mansfieldhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03135589216216151585noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-827113736357895263.post-34524761792887573262012-05-14T09:37:31.005-07:002012-05-14T09:37:31.005-07:00again, very different from your earlier ones.very ...again, very different from your earlier ones.very compact and powerfully packed.but I guess, the experience would vary in accordance with the reader's perception of what Jesus stands for.Abin Chakrabortyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17534639363132246570noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-827113736357895263.post-67542507027797013102012-05-14T08:11:38.363-07:002012-05-14T08:11:38.363-07:00Whoosh!!! This one says everything in its succinct...Whoosh!!! This one says everything in its succinct brilliance.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.com