tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-827113736357895263.post312090938225976356..comments2023-10-06T00:42:14.738-07:00Comments on Mexican Radio: Campfire LoveHerotomosthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11486093602914824276noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-827113736357895263.post-68559351317494514482012-04-30T08:22:56.809-07:002012-04-30T08:22:56.809-07:00I could see the woman so clearly in your poem. I l...I could see the woman so clearly in your poem. I love your opening line-it starts the poem in a lighthearted way and then it continues to draw you in deeper and deeper until the killer last line hits you like a car crash you see coming but can't avoid. Brilliant!Lolamousehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12508347229501155001noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-827113736357895263.post-9844655068004828232012-04-28T21:16:53.135-07:002012-04-28T21:16:53.135-07:00Wow!!! I love your closing line and the entire pie...Wow!!! I love your closing line and the entire piece is just bursting with rich tangible feeling. I liked this a lot, herotomost! I was late to the party, too! Smiles!Hannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10124956200834969600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-827113736357895263.post-70556569717036615612012-04-28T17:12:28.102-07:002012-04-28T17:12:28.102-07:00I never thought of the way Mucha's work would ...I never thought of the way Mucha's work would affect a man. Now that I think about it, you have described it perfectly, and made me see through different eyes. Thanks!<br />And late or not, Corey, this is very well done. I'm sure the artist would think so, too.<br />KKay L. Davieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09966266404058177742noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-827113736357895263.post-68779051343742296742012-04-28T16:22:54.473-07:002012-04-28T16:22:54.473-07:00holy hell, i think i need a drink of cool water.holy hell, i think i need a drink of cool water.Marianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07027954226798117530noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-827113736357895263.post-31042901182496357652012-04-28T16:04:08.525-07:002012-04-28T16:04:08.525-07:00Hoo wee! I'm liking this.
I was visited by a...Hoo wee! I'm liking this. <br /><br />I was visited by a Succubus in a dream when I was sixteen. Got to love that supernatural love!Fireblossomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-827113736357895263.post-57720768501340144072012-04-28T12:11:52.048-07:002012-04-28T12:11:52.048-07:00I see those lovely Mucha paintings created sensual...I see those lovely Mucha paintings created sensuality in your poem. I love the ending. Great work as always!!Susie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-827113736357895263.post-77600064363637017622012-04-28T11:48:30.361-07:002012-04-28T11:48:30.361-07:00This is sooo hot! Sensuous, passionate, intense, ...This is sooo hot! Sensuous, passionate, intense, and a killer ending line.Mary B. Mansfieldhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03135589216216151585noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-827113736357895263.post-4933714701926841572012-04-28T11:42:20.728-07:002012-04-28T11:42:20.728-07:00I love the passion and image of the woman you drew...I love the passion and image of the woman you drew here..hoops and bangles, brunette ringlets.<br /><br />I specially like the third stanza: <br />Plunging my pink skin into the white hot of a fire seasoned with oak and rosemary<br />I fled unburned but unhealed all the same, forever searching my soul in every crowdScarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-827113736357895263.post-22426365132587821622012-04-28T10:57:23.911-07:002012-04-28T10:57:23.911-07:00Oooh, yes! I can see how all those images of wildl...Oooh, yes! I can see how all those images of wildly passionate women could give rise to these words. Mucha's conception of womanhood could make a slave of any man. I love this for its sensuous images, especially of the second stanza, and the sense of hopeless entanglement at the end.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-827113736357895263.post-37946310120374128602012-04-28T09:36:31.975-07:002012-04-28T09:36:31.975-07:00Oh my goodness, this is a passionate torrent of in...Oh my goodness, this is a passionate torrent of intensity and emotion. Draws the reader right into the maelstrom. I love, especially,the closing line, which speaks such volumes.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.com