tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-827113736357895263.post330830956754426140..comments2023-10-06T00:42:14.738-07:00Comments on Mexican Radio: CreationHerotomosthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11486093602914824276noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-827113736357895263.post-69542159421619289902014-04-28T07:58:37.835-07:002014-04-28T07:58:37.835-07:00Though a couple of images read to me like the narr...Though a couple of images read to me like the narrator must wear a wife-beater T-shirt, I adored the overall struggle with creativity you depict so truthfully, especially the parallel of seasoned bitch, security guard, and 15-year old brother.Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-827113736357895263.post-2130661345078719792014-03-25T06:14:36.466-07:002014-03-25T06:14:36.466-07:00Each simile packs a punch. You have a way of using...Each simile packs a punch. You have a way of using realism as a side dish to poetic thought and it always provides a little shock value to the stanzas. ("Oh my, didn't see that one coming!")Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-827113736357895263.post-1963804882574910612014-03-25T02:30:45.069-07:002014-03-25T02:30:45.069-07:00Thanks for turning the anxiety of influence into a...Thanks for turning the anxiety of influence into a spanking contest, a sexually charged confrontation where the edge between victory and defeat (again, again) is spinning in the air like a plug nickel tossed by fate. Bring it on. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-827113736357895263.post-59296418297672659422014-03-24T22:53:59.128-07:002014-03-24T22:53:59.128-07:00"...like a fat security guard
Who hates your ..."...like a fat security guard<br />Who hates your guts..."<br />For some reason, that made me laugh. I'd probably be terrified if such a person hated me, but coming from you, it made me smile. Go figger.<br />KKay L. Davieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09966266404058177742noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-827113736357895263.post-37191635774978977442014-03-24T18:36:43.246-07:002014-03-24T18:36:43.246-07:00Creation goes from soul/mind, and ego will make s...Creation goes from soul/mind, and ego will make sure you're in comfort zone. This is your first two stanzas. Love your last stanza about connection with 'grandma hope chest', 'with open hand' ( I read like with open heart), and yes it has to be sexy. Empowering poem. Thanks for sharing.humbirdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00106270909713851811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-827113736357895263.post-76784717948648500562014-03-24T17:37:57.524-07:002014-03-24T17:37:57.524-07:00Very insightful and dramatic. Creation really is ...Very insightful and dramatic. Creation really is a full contact sport, or so it feels while it is going on. Nice job.<br />Steve K.Steve Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04818671944215117618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-827113736357895263.post-1554366595167657302012-05-04T10:57:29.605-07:002012-05-04T10:57:29.605-07:00A clever twist around what creation can bring abou...A clever twist around what creation can bring about. Great write!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-827113736357895263.post-59955610861847947572012-05-03T04:43:18.479-07:002012-05-03T04:43:18.479-07:00Cool poem ...one that needs read and re read ...lo...Cool poem ...one that needs read and re read ...loved it on first reading thank you for sharing xAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10624767707167052328noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-827113736357895263.post-43554713231752310352012-05-02T14:50:05.653-07:002012-05-02T14:50:05.653-07:00I read this earlier and thought you did a great jo...I read this earlier and thought you did a great job with the concept of creation...internal and external circles/ realities is a good format. I specially like your first stanza ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-827113736357895263.post-20465935882640913852012-05-02T04:32:53.078-07:002012-05-02T04:32:53.078-07:00This is one helluva poem. I had to laugh at the si...This is one helluva poem. I had to laugh at the sitting on your head like a brother... and staring contest is great.Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.com