tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-827113736357895263.post7044029969689296657..comments2023-10-06T00:42:14.738-07:00Comments on Mexican Radio: The Oldest WhoreHerotomosthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11486093602914824276noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-827113736357895263.post-66598677338726996612012-09-10T16:00:40.885-07:002012-09-10T16:00:40.885-07:00My my...you have captured addiction in a rough and...My my...you have captured addiction in a rough and raw manner. Brave of you to put it out there. But isn't that what we poets are called to do? Susie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-827113736357895263.post-52926472976141511482012-03-14T15:52:41.060-07:002012-03-14T15:52:41.060-07:00great characters and descriptions
four animal ded...great characters and descriptions<br /><br /><a href="http://zongrik.wordpress.com/2012/02/20/four-animal-dedication-senryu/" rel="nofollow">four animal dedication senryu</a>zongrikhttp://zongrik.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-827113736357895263.post-10532875664892563232012-03-13T11:43:24.302-07:002012-03-13T11:43:24.302-07:00i'll echo mrs. G's thoughts, that perhaps ...i'll echo mrs. G's thoughts, that perhaps the commentary here goes far deeper than a slightly stomach-turning mature encounter. there is a kind of dark psychology that runs, wordless, in each of us (and in so many non-personal entities) that we ourselves are at a loss to understand. metaphors abound with me, and i tend to find them everywhere, but in this case, i don't think it's something i'm imposing on the words. this feels like you're SAYING SOMETHING. and you're saying it about a lot of things. <br />i love that you've created this, and let it stand. i'm struck by this, C, hanging in the gallery, and think i'll stand here a while and think on it.shawnacyhttp://shawnacykiker.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-827113736357895263.post-66258721457320513992012-03-13T07:03:41.507-07:002012-03-13T07:03:41.507-07:00I think a lot of men are swept before an avalanche...I think a lot of men are swept before an avalanche in the form of desires that pretty much lead them by the...nose. The congressman, the priest, the rock star who end up as tabloid fodder know this well. I expect that it isn't simply horny desire that lands them there. It's something darker, and more demanding than that. <br /><br />If I had to name one thing that the sexes don't understand about each other, it would be these: women don't really understand how demanding a male sexuality can be, and men don't understand how demanding a woman's emotions can be. This leads to a whole lot of tilted heads and wtf's on both sides.<br /><br />So sez me. Tune in next week when I explain why the earth is round. :-PFireblossomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-827113736357895263.post-54230948482882114982012-03-13T05:06:01.460-07:002012-03-13T05:06:01.460-07:00Hmmm.. not my favourite of yours for the uncomfort...Hmmm.. not my favourite of yours for the uncomfortable truths you reveal about what goes on in small anonymous rooms the world over, but hats off to your courage in turning the sordid realities into poetry.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-827113736357895263.post-74161597284435752772012-03-12T20:28:56.833-07:002012-03-12T20:28:56.833-07:00how have I not commented on this piece already? o...how have I not commented on this piece already? oh, where have you been hiding her all these long months. Funny, after reading this piece twice, I get the feeling the oldest whore is not the madame who does the lashing but her husk of a customer. As always, you have these layers which you present in a subtle matter. That be a gift, Rowley. Many a poet would not trust his reader to pick up on that and hit us over the head with it. You are a cunning, wascle, Mr. Wabbit. <br /><br />viva laIsadora Gruyehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13036782300945079952noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-827113736357895263.post-57427765999778267022012-03-12T18:29:24.189-07:002012-03-12T18:29:24.189-07:00Had me at the title, man--but you didn't stop ...Had me at the title, man--but you didn't stop there. God what a way to make a living. <br />"...She asked what he wanted<br />She told him what she had..." there's nothing like a simple business arrangement, eh? Second stanza is pretty revelatory, the rest, you put the reader there, whether they want to be or not--excellent writing.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-827113736357895263.post-63759526894950278522012-03-12T18:24:39.952-07:002012-03-12T18:24:39.952-07:00I agree with Marian, "poor financial skills&q...I agree with Marian, "poor financial skills" is TOO good.<br />KKay L. Davieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09966266404058177742noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-827113736357895263.post-34431022937787708352012-03-12T17:34:14.083-07:002012-03-12T17:34:14.083-07:00Strong character studies,, a good read.Strong character studies,, a good read.Mark Windhamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01662876682127886074noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-827113736357895263.post-68577708342225846372012-03-12T12:49:22.235-07:002012-03-12T12:49:22.235-07:00Wow, I guess somebody likes it rough! Very vivid ...Wow, I guess somebody likes it rough! Very vivid description, nicely done.Mary B. Mansfieldhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03135589216216151585noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-827113736357895263.post-77964166543067165072012-03-12T11:26:38.520-07:002012-03-12T11:26:38.520-07:00Yikes! This poem will stay with me throughout the ...Yikes! This poem will stay with me throughout the day.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-827113736357895263.post-82699192178388650942012-03-12T11:17:02.391-07:002012-03-12T11:17:02.391-07:00Wowzers! The very scariest thing being how much I ...Wowzers! The very scariest thing being how much I related to the old hag, hee hee! What a story! Love the last line SO MUCH!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-827113736357895263.post-79191903059828007262012-03-12T10:26:10.592-07:002012-03-12T10:26:10.592-07:00oh my GOD three for your poor financial skills!!
y...oh my GOD three for your poor financial skills!!<br />you SLAY me. this is awesome, mister. more!Marianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04030161532713347225noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-827113736357895263.post-6408805332106071012012-03-12T08:59:21.670-07:002012-03-12T08:59:21.670-07:00Whew...what a tale of addiction and captivity ~
I...Whew...what a tale of addiction and captivity ~<br /><br />I specially like what she shouted in tongues...I guess some men just like it this way<br /><br />Thanks for sharing this ~<br /><br />Heaven<br /><br />http://a-sweetlust.blogspot.com/2012/03/step.htmlAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com