tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-827113736357895263.post7455676451861106729..comments2023-10-06T00:42:14.738-07:00Comments on Mexican Radio: AffectedHerotomosthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11486093602914824276noreply@blogger.comBlogger21125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-827113736357895263.post-88317228024094388502013-01-04T13:57:41.289-08:002013-01-04T13:57:41.289-08:00Corey, you always amaze me~ The vivid journey lea...Corey, you always amaze me~ The vivid journey leading us into this domain...where is the book?! YOUR short stories should be published ;D Your talent is awe inspiring!<br /><br />Happy New Year!Ellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06070952447277684613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-827113736357895263.post-42095839884147650722013-01-04T00:31:38.952-08:002013-01-04T00:31:38.952-08:00Wow, the "universal fool unspooling," ni...Wow, the "universal fool unspooling," nice phrase. You really brought this man to life for us. I loved it. Peace, Amy<br />http://sharplittlepencil.com/2013/01/04/twofer/Sharp Little Pencilhttp://sharplittlepencil.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-827113736357895263.post-10501169280730330142013-01-03T11:52:06.343-08:002013-01-03T11:52:06.343-08:00I love "a pencil sketch of a day" and &q...I love "a pencil sketch of a day" and "the path to happiness was fraught with tigers" and everything in between. I've seen days like that and have met some of those tigers.<br />K<br />Kay L. Davieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09966266404058177742noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-827113736357895263.post-51678161537429382852013-01-03T09:31:28.770-08:002013-01-03T09:31:28.770-08:00So your second sentence!?? I love the whole thing ...So your second sentence!?? I love the whole thing but that has some dimension to it...so much vivid and unique packed in this whole piece, Corey!! I love the idea that the path to happiness is such a challenge...true to life, I think. :) Much enjoyed! Hannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10124956200834969600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-827113736357895263.post-27509133989291047772013-01-03T09:00:01.736-08:002013-01-03T09:00:01.736-08:00It seems to me, Corey, that you've hit on a ne...It seems to me, Corey, that you've hit on a near universal truth. Each of us, at one time or another, unravels, if only a bit. Your character seems frayed past the seams without thread or needle. Many of us ( what's the stat? 10%? ) know this level of unspooling. Many of us know that the battle is to continue trying to reel it in and tuck it back under the tarp. Fabulous imagery and inferences.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12460881702249079009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-827113736357895263.post-38453649099886825542013-01-03T06:48:10.647-08:002013-01-03T06:48:10.647-08:00An interesting journey of the universal fool unspo...An interesting journey of the universal fool unspooling ~ I say he is a realist ~<br /><br />Great story here Corey ~ Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-827113736357895263.post-82820080799945472482013-01-03T04:47:25.023-08:002013-01-03T04:47:25.023-08:00It spoke to him of wasted energy
and lost souls a...It spoke to him of wasted energy <br />and lost souls and a need to stay put, <br />the path to happiness was fraught with tigers.<br /><br />Truly said Corey! There're leakages but one must be in control as life is full of challenges! Nicely!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-827113736357895263.post-77723705777333413252013-01-03T00:00:00.535-08:002013-01-03T00:00:00.535-08:00As always I am impressed. You give us tidbits that...As always I am impressed. You give us tidbits that leave us wanting more. Rope burn existence is just one of the phrases I love. Great piece! :)Susie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-827113736357895263.post-24973646648534958582013-01-02T20:56:33.244-08:002013-01-02T20:56:33.244-08:00Love how you saved 'unspooling' for the en...Love how you saved 'unspooling' for the end of this awesome write! <br />(you must be the new grandfather everyone is talking about ~ Congrats!)Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-827113736357895263.post-20498801059897554532013-01-02T20:47:37.708-08:002013-01-02T20:47:37.708-08:00Are you kidding me??? This is freaking awesome! Yo...Are you kidding me??? This is freaking awesome! You rock, dude. :)<br /><br />These are my favorites:<br />"trailered his madness"<br />the pig/chicken section cracked me up ... love all those /p/ sounds<br />"pencil sketch of a day"<br />the description of the woman; I'd like to meet her too ... the patchy hair was priceless!<br /><br />Great writing, Corey. I always love your work. You're so entertaining.jasmine calyxhttp://jasminecalyx.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-827113736357895263.post-19534978101231748642013-01-02T16:30:23.309-08:002013-01-02T16:30:23.309-08:00I was struck by the same sections that Kerry menti...I was struck by the same sections that Kerry mentioned. This reminds me of the Fool in the tarot deck, and his journey.Fireblossomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-827113736357895263.post-16795448713380604492013-01-02T15:09:40.872-08:002013-01-02T15:09:40.872-08:00What a character you have created here, Corey! Lo...What a character you have created here, Corey! Loved what you created with the words.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-827113736357895263.post-76512583487450428702013-01-02T13:20:32.567-08:002013-01-02T13:20:32.567-08:00You had me hooked from start to finish: I had to ...You had me hooked from start to finish: I had to keep reading to discover what it was about! The only word I recognised in this zany piece was UNSPOOLING. Love it.vivinfrancehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07388722600118753457noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-827113736357895263.post-12474403246486935282013-01-02T12:54:13.607-08:002013-01-02T12:54:13.607-08:00universal fool - wonderful imageryuniversal fool - wonderful imageryLLM Callinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17199375981896229914noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-827113736357895263.post-10677886541419528872013-01-02T11:50:25.532-08:002013-01-02T11:50:25.532-08:00Love this! That line about looking for a poltice t...Love this! That line about looking for a poltice to take the sting out his rope burn exsistance it just amazing. Katerihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05645403612156172760noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-827113736357895263.post-29136999663728619652013-01-02T11:44:51.382-08:002013-01-02T11:44:51.382-08:00what the hell is this? i love this! you had me at ...what the hell is this? i love this! you had me at "trailered" and you can keep me.<br />Marianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04030161532713347225noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-827113736357895263.post-51787111689477716032013-01-02T11:19:29.364-08:002013-01-02T11:19:29.364-08:00I like it that the woman's hair will be patchy...I like it that the woman's hair will be patchy, and the cup is made from tree skin. As Kerry says, some surreal, some just that dazzle you get from desert sun and the idea of time balling up behind you. Good stuff for an old man, my friend. ;_)hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-827113736357895263.post-72642566940041674382013-01-02T10:22:16.826-08:002013-01-02T10:22:16.826-08:00So vivid. I especiall like "a pencil sketch o...So vivid. I especiall like "a pencil sketch of a day" and "rope burn existence"...<br /><br />Happy New Year!Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-827113736357895263.post-20730259117836413182013-01-02T10:14:52.459-08:002013-01-02T10:14:52.459-08:00You made him so real, I can almost taste the tobac...You made him so real, I can almost taste the tobacco juice. Awesome writing, Corey!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-827113736357895263.post-73888008834232282652013-01-02T09:45:02.267-08:002013-01-02T09:45:02.267-08:00Love this! It is great. There's such wonderf...Love this! It is great. There's such wonderful imagery. I especially loved "rope burn existence."Teresahttp://razzamadazzle.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-827113736357895263.post-36780942018043467802013-01-02T07:32:58.486-08:002013-01-02T07:32:58.486-08:00... content in his role of the universal fool unsp...... content in his role of the universal fool unspooling.<br /><br />This portrait has elements of surrealism and elements of the journey of Everyman. <br />The description of his madness oozing out of its loose binding and peering over his shoulder at his own reflection is just one example of your creative brilliance.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.com