I liked to play tea party
As soon as the laughter faded
The other boys diminished to mere pinpoints
That’s when she wrote the day
Eight years, three months
She may have been the one that taught every boy the way, timeless
Her eyes were old world goddess, rapt, penetrating
Her innocence, not a day over her eight years
The universe, our tea party universe
While still full of potential and possibility
Shrank, custom fit to the shape of our energy entwined
And we imagined, oh Lord, did we imagine
Some days I barely remember the sequence of events
Only that, in the end I was filled with the future
Knowing, somehow, that she was the future
If not for me, then at least for the universe
Golly, this is powerful—especially the last six lines.
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I’m still loving this tea-party universe. <3