For Flash Fiction 55...Its hard to keep my mouth shut...55 words, really??
That shit stole the Bee Gees cassette from his car, and here's the thing, it's not like he couldn't afford his own. His dad works at Bonanza and his mom sold Avon. He took a drag from his cigarette, flipped the butt and shifted the tire iron to his other hand. Smoke this mother fucker.
Hahaha! You're on a roll today... I like it when you come out hot and smokin'!
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ReplyDeleteYikes! There's a great comedy here between the beegees, bonanza and avon. (Smell so sweet.) k.
ReplyDeleteHow dare someone steal a Bee Gee's cassette. I imagine he rocked the orange jumpsuit. :)
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