Wednesday, December 3, 2014

We Tulips



First kiss, first Kiss song, first kiss off, first
These stretch marks, these tree rings, these giant hands
He, she, she, me, we, dancing
Getting life precisely right, combining ingredients

18 comments:

  1. Love it. It is a beautiful life when you spend it with someone you love. Thanks so much for writing for the challenge.

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  2. Ah--very sweet. Of course, I see bits of your recent wedding here, though it also goes much deeper. Gets to the point in just a lovely way--a kind of family tree rings. Lovely. Thanks. k.

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  3. I didn't even read title--very charming! k.

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  4. Lovely! Such movement in this poem!

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  5. This dance of life unfolding beautifully!
    I am happy you are happy~

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  6. oohhh beautiful. though it did bring to mind Gene Simmons, not so pretty.
    xoxoxoxo babyluv

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  7. very charming and witty. you do have a way with words. simple and affective.

    gracias mi amigo

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  8. When I saw Susie's challenge, I remembered the collaboration you and I once wrote which featured the night-blooming cactus flower! I am thrilled to see you were inspired to write again. This is romantic and subtle.. really gorgeous.

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  9. This nature loving one loves the mention of tree rings...the flow and depth of this is beautiful, Corey.

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  10. Very nice. A fun, romantic tribute to a fun, romantic relationship.

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  11. the last line tell me its a relationship 'made in heaven'

    much love...

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  12. So this is what tulips do at night!

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  13. Your poem made me feel your happiness and some circles of your life, witty and fun and romantic. I enjoyed it very much.

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  14. First Kiss song, ha! I'm with Mama Zen.

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  15. Love the play on words title!

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  16. A perfect recipe for blooming a garden of happiness. ♥

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  17. Title and verses are sweet and romantic Corey ~ Both of you are lucky ~

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