"From the racks to the stacks to the best on wax......"
Wednesday, December 3, 2014
We Tulips
First kiss, first Kiss song, first kiss off, first These stretch marks, these tree rings, these giant hands He, she, she, me, we, dancing Getting life precisely right, combining ingredients
Ah--very sweet. Of course, I see bits of your recent wedding here, though it also goes much deeper. Gets to the point in just a lovely way--a kind of family tree rings. Lovely. Thanks. k.
When I saw Susie's challenge, I remembered the collaboration you and I once wrote which featured the night-blooming cactus flower! I am thrilled to see you were inspired to write again. This is romantic and subtle.. really gorgeous.
Love it. It is a beautiful life when you spend it with someone you love. Thanks so much for writing for the challenge.
ReplyDeleteAh--very sweet. Of course, I see bits of your recent wedding here, though it also goes much deeper. Gets to the point in just a lovely way--a kind of family tree rings. Lovely. Thanks. k.
ReplyDeleteI didn't even read title--very charming! k.
ReplyDeleteLovely! Such movement in this poem!
ReplyDeleteThis dance of life unfolding beautifully!
ReplyDeleteI am happy you are happy~
oohhh beautiful. though it did bring to mind Gene Simmons, not so pretty.
ReplyDeletexoxoxoxo babyluv
very charming and witty. you do have a way with words. simple and affective.
ReplyDeletegracias mi amigo
When I saw Susie's challenge, I remembered the collaboration you and I once wrote which featured the night-blooming cactus flower! I am thrilled to see you were inspired to write again. This is romantic and subtle.. really gorgeous.
ReplyDeleteThis nature loving one loves the mention of tree rings...the flow and depth of this is beautiful, Corey.
ReplyDeleteVery nice. A fun, romantic tribute to a fun, romantic relationship.
ReplyDeletethe last line tell me its a relationship 'made in heaven'
ReplyDeletemuch love...
So this is what tulips do at night!
ReplyDeleteYour poem made me feel your happiness and some circles of your life, witty and fun and romantic. I enjoyed it very much.
ReplyDeleteI love that first line!
ReplyDeleteFirst Kiss song, ha! I'm with Mama Zen.
ReplyDeleteLove the play on words title!
ReplyDeleteA perfect recipe for blooming a garden of happiness. ♥
ReplyDeleteTitle and verses are sweet and romantic Corey ~ Both of you are lucky ~
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