Wednesday, January 9, 2013

"B" Side


It started with a pin point light and the smell of juniper berries
A warm wash of sand and sea water, irrigation for the soul
Growing, golem sized glow, coupled with the tink and tank of piano
And the sweet taste of honeyed almonds roasted over a hearts desire

Oh wow….there she is my sister dear
More beautiful from this diet of primordial soup
Spanning  the “It” with a universal smile and swagger
Tending the garden, mulching dreams for those not yet departed
Cueing up music that builds thoughts and shapes bosoms
Music from the “B” side

14 comments:

  1. How lucky you are to have seen her this way. How lucky we are to read your recollection, which stimulates all senses and prompts an inward look. Deep and wondrous, Corey.

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  2. I love this and so would she ;D
    I love these lines:

    "It started with a pin point light and the smell of juniper berries
    A warm wash of sand and sea water, irrigation for the soul"

    and

    "Tending the garden, mulching dreams for those not yet departed
    Cueing up music that builds thoughts and shapes bosoms
    Music from the “B” side"

    Wow I love how you make words dance :D

    Thank you Corey for brightening my day!

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  3. That's pretty darned good for a 'B' side!

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  4. The "B" side holds hidden gems, I know this.

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  5. This poem made me smile and made me say WOW out loud!

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  6. Very WOW-like and upbeat... made me smile.

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  7. I like the mystery in this as well as the images you paint so well. Excellent.

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  8. Beautiful recollections of an unique soul. I love the idea of her tending a garden of dreams for those not yet departed - such a caring image. The B-Side has merits of its own.

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  9. Splendid! You have a magical way with words :)

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  10. Why an I thinking gin?
    Must the berries, added to the song.

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  11. the scent of juniper berries pulled me in right from the start, and this just kept lapping at me to the end, Corey, it's wonderful. golem-sized glow? honeyed almonds roasted over hearts desire? swagger? mulching dreams? i want to meet her.

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  12. I like the smell and taste of your words ~ Like what others said, WOW ~ Smiles ~

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  13. What a beautiful vision of her. So glad you shared it with us...most definitely a wow.

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